Friday, 5 January 2024

Editing

 Editing process


Editing starts at the very beginning.

I write my first and second draft by hand using a fountain pen.




This hand written draft then gets typed up on my computer with more fundamental corrections made at this point.  Once the complete manuscript is typed up, double line spaced, I then print it off, usually a ream of paper.  It then gets 'red penned' again by me then a proof reader.  Here spelling errors that have escaped my attention and many do! as well as grammar is corrected.  Continuity is also checked.  In my latest edit I found that a character called Alan had changed his name to Colin a couple of chapters later, how did that happen?Continuity is a key factor when editing.  Its common for characters to undergo an unwitting transformation of some kind so I always keep a list of characters including a brief profile so I know who thy are and what they look like.



This is my reference book, it contains character profiles, bits of dialogue that I might use, research notes and ideas, everything that I need when writing my novel.  Lots of things in here never make it into the novel but is a rich source of information for sequels or following novels in a series.

Once I have made the 'red pen' corrections from the printed draft to the typed version I then set about reading from the computer.


Errors that have been missed, and there usually are some, including paragraphs that seem awkward are changed at this point.

The editing process can take quite a long time especially if I choose to use several proof readers.  My publisher is a small operation who does not proof read my work.  I like it that way as there can be no arguments between us.  I'm not sure that I could work with an editor who insists on me changing paragraphs and dialogue or one who criticises my work too much.



From this


 to this


then this


finally this

Editing is a process that cannot be ignored, it's an integral part of the book writing process.  Unfortunately not all errors can be found, they may even exist in some of the best written books.

Wednesday, 3 January 2024

A Psychological thriller

 


                      The Witness                          
The day that changed her life
A beauty spot on Scotland’s east coast is where it started

The day begins innocently enough as Josie MacDonald, landscape artist, leaves her aunt’s house to walk the short distance to Spey Bay.  It’s early in the morning; the sun has just cleared the eastern horizon.  The light is perfect her surroundings peaceful so Josie finds the ideal spot and begins to paint.

Have you ever experienced a day so terrifying that it changed your life forever?

Josie had no idea what was waiting for her when she set out that morning or how the events of that fateful day would impact on her life and those of her friends.

The Witness, a psychological thriller guaranteed to excite you from the very first page.





Available on Kindle from Amazon.UK at just £1.99 or Amazon.com $2.99

Signed copies of all my books are available direct from me at just £10.00 per copy inc postage.  (UK only)
Simply message me:- kevinmarshnovels@gmail.com

Happy Reading.

Sunday, 26 November 2023

My books on Kindle


All of my books are available on Kindle from Amazon at just £1.99 or $2.99



The Witness is a psychological thriller set in Scotland and London and sees artist Josie MacDonald hounded by a psychopathic killer.

The Cellist; a crime novel that introduces Detective Sergeant Isobel Woods.  Also featuring characters and references from The Witness.

The Photographer; another crime novel featuring DS Isobel Woods and her continuing story.



The Torc Trilogy consists of The Belgae Torc, The Gordian Knot and Cutting the Gordian Knot, an action packed adventure spanning 2000 years.

This trilogy is completely different from my crime novels.  The series is not fantasy, but real historical references weaved into a compelling tale of opposing factions struggling for ultimate world domination.

More detailed information of all my books can be found on this blog.

Happy Reading!


 

Special Offer


My latest novel is currently available on Kindle from Amazon at just £0.77 or $0.99
Offer ends at the end of November, so don't delay, pick up your copy today. 


 Alternatively if you would like a signed copy of the paperback then its just £10.00 including postage.  (UK Only).

Simply message me and I'll send you details of payment then pop one in the post.


Happy Reading!

Monday, 13 November 2023

Signed copy


Thank you to everyone who bought a copy of my new novel.  If you would like a signed copy I am currently running a special offer of just £10.00 Inc delivery, ( UK only). 
Simply message me.

HAPPY READING!






 

Sunday, 12 November 2023

Poster


I created this poster for an event I'm doing shortly.



 

My new novel is available as a paperback and on Kindle from Amazon.

Kindle price special offer at just 77p for this month only.
If you would like a signed copy then message me.
£10.00 postage included UK only.

Happy reading.

Friday, 3 November 2023

The Royal Park Murders


Introducing the cover of my latest novel



Her skin crawled as she sensed danger. Turning away she began to run but there was no rhythm to her pace, it was a desperate retreat filled with panic. After a few paces, she looked back again but it was the same. The pavement was empty, the man was nowhere to be seen…
The Royal Park Murders synopsis:-
The Royal Parks of London are safe green spaces enjoyed by many thousands of people, but when the body of a young woman is discovered in Hyde Park, the harmonious balance between nature and recreation is disturbed.
Newly promoted Detective Inspector Isobel Woods is tasked with leading the investigation, then elements of a previous case threaten her wellbeing forcing her to prove to a new boss that she is fit to lead her team.
Things rarely go to plan and the situation escalates when the killer strikes again. Unexpectedly, a web of abuse, fraud and deceit is exposed and as they investigate further Woods and her colleagues’ lives are endangered.
With resources stretched to the limit, the team must keep themselves and the public safe.
What other surprises will be uncovered before the investigation reaches a satisfactory conclusion?

Out on the 10th November the paperback and kindle version should be available from Amazon and to order from bookshops soon after.

Happy reading.